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Another day, another boring ball. You sipped your cocktail and rubbed elbows with the finest. You had been dragged there by your best friend in her quest to meet an upper class man, as you had been so many times before. Who knew tonight would be so different?

You spotted him coming down the stairs, the most gorgeous thing you had ever seen. His long black hair was slicked back so nicely, his elegant suit hugged his body, his emerald green eyes sparkled with mischief. You stopped and stared. He was beautiful, an Adonis, a god among men.

His eye caught yours for a faction of a second and he smiled a knowing and naughty smile. Your breath caught in your chest. But then he looked away, it was over.

He flipped his cane with ease and smacked a nearby man in the face. The gasps of horror spread through the crowd, but the spectical had only just begun. He grabbed another man and flipped him onto an alter. You were frozen, unable to breath as he took out some sort of whirling device. He jammed it into the man's eye and looked about triumphantly, reveling in the chaos and fear he caused. His eye caught yours for a second time and he smiled wider, it was the predatory smile of a jaguar stumbling upon a wounded gazelle. You couldn't move, you were lost in his eyes and his pearly white teeth. He licked his lips and looked as though he was about to come towards you as your friend grabbed your hand and pulled you away.

"Come on, (name)! We have to get out of here!"

You stumbled away with her looking over your shoulder to see his suit turn into an ornate and somehow even tighter war outfit. You rushed down the stairs with him following at a leisurely pace. He was in control and perfectly happy with it.

"Kneel before me." The people kept running. He slammed his scepter on the ground and was suddenly everywhere at once. "I said KNEEL!"

People fell to their kneels around you. But you froze, a deer in the headlights.This was completely the wrong time to notice, but by the gods he was hot.

"Is this not simpler?" His silky smooth voice cooed and effortlessly enchanted you. "Is this not your natural state?" His eyes caught yours and he stopped. "What is this? You still stand?" He waded through the sea of people until he stood just centimeters away from you. He ran a finger under your chin, tilting your head up to face him. "Look at you, you mewling quim. Your eyes are filled with awe and lust."

You gasped.

"What is this?" He tilted his head and smiled his predatory grin again. "Fear? Tell me darling, are you afraid because I know, or are you afraid because you just figured it out? Look at this." He ran his free hand along your side. "You're getting hot for me already."

You tried to speak but only some sort of strange mewing sound came out.

"Hm." He chuckled to him self as he put both hands on your shoulders and slammed you to your knees. You looked up at him eyes wide. "Look at you, from this angle you look almost attractive." He bent down and whispered in your ear "You know, I could take you right now, just like this, take you until my cum dripped down your chin and onto that pretty little chest of yours. And then I'd take you again, and again, until I've had my fill, and believe me, that can take quite a while. You'd like that wouldn't you darling?" His fingers traced your lips. They were so impossibly soft and smooth, and in that moment you realized just how much you wanted him.

You tried to say something. To tell him you would like that. To tell him you wanted him, but no sound came out.

"Your eyes speak volumes." He purred. "So dirty." He straightened up and looked around as if suddenly bored with the crowd gathered around him. "This scene has lost it's appeal, and time is short. Come, human." He pulled you up by the arm. "We best be gone before the Avengers arrive."

You found yourself underground somewhere, in a dingy bedroom. The door clicked locked. You turned to see Loki, his back against the only door, his eyes glinting with predatory instinct. "You can't escape my dear." He grabbed your hips and pulled them against his. "Not that you want to." He lolled himself against you lazily. "Come on, bitch, pleasure me."

You squeaked and fell to your knees.

Loki laughed. "Who says humans don't crave subjugation? Clearly this one does!" You fumbled with his pants until they fell to the ground and he stepped out of them. "Go ahead, mortal, suck."

You wrapped you lips around his erection earning you a pleased gasp from Loki. He slid his fingers through your hair, gently at first, but then he grabbed fistfuls of your hair. You squeaked and he thrust deep into your throat. You gagged and whimpered around him.

"What is this? Is it already too much for you?" Loki pursed his lips. "It seems I have forgotten how delicate these mortals are. Fine," He released your hair. "pleasure me at your own pace, but be warned, if I find it unsatisfactory I will take you as roughly as I please. And you may not live through that."

You took him as deeply as you could; you bobbed your head as fast as you could. As promised, he did not thrust into you again.

He moaned and put his hands back on your head. "Yes, mmm, keep going." You ran your tongue along his tip as you bobbed. "Oh. Such a good little mortal." He held your head to him as he twitched and came in your mouth. You swallowed as much as you could but some still managed to escape your lips. You removed yourself from his cock, stood and licked your lips clean.

"That was better than expected. I think you deserve a reward for that." Loki pushed you onto the bed and spread your legs. "I will take you to the edge and back. I will make you scream for your king until your voice is hoarse. I will fill every inch of you with pleasure until you can remember nothing else." He thrust into you.

"Ahh! Oh my god." You moaned and held onto his back.

"That's right. I am your god. I am your king. I am the Lord Loki and you will not forget it. Now, call for your king. Beg for me."

"My king!" He thrust into you and you whimpered. "Oh, My king, please."

"Please what?" He grinned and bit your neck.

"Please, give me more. Fuck me more."

"As you wish my little whore." He fucked you harder, faster, getting into a strong rhythm. His hands danced over your body, pleasuring everywhere they touched. You moaned and whimpered for him, your back arching into his touch. You dug your nails into his back, you were close to climax.

"Loki!" You screamed as you came around him.

"Shhh. I am almost ready." A few more thrusts and he came inside you. He breathed deeply for a few seconds, catching his breath. "I think another round is in order." He ran his finger around your breast.

There was a knock at the door.

"I am busy!" Loki yelled back.

"I'm sorry, sir. The tesaract is acting up. We need your assistance." Hawkeye insisted from the other side.

Loki clicked his tongue impatiently. "Fine. Give me a minute."

"Very good sir." Hawkeye's footsteps receded.

"I suppose the next round with have to wait my pet. But I will give you one last reward before I go." Loki pressed his lips to yours. He bit your lip and you opened your mouth to accept his tongue. He ran his tongue over your teeth, across the walls of your mouth and wrestled with your tongue. But all too soon he pulled himself off you. "I know how you have yearned for that." He got off the bed and redressed. "Now, you will stay in this room and wait for me, unclothed. From this moment on, you are my personal concubine. There will be no leaving, no escaping. This is your life now. You will be well cared for, and you will be mine, only mine. Got that, pet?"

"Yes, my lord."

"Good mortal." Loki smiled and locked the door behind him.
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Because, Loki.
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teamleaderALICE Featured By Owner 5 days ago  New Deviant Student General Artist
much nose bleedLlama Emoji-16 (Nose Bleed) [V1] Kyouko Toshinou (Sparkle Nose Bleed) [V1] Tsukimi's Nose Bleed Day29 - Nosebleed 
SneakyXWoman13 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my god I literally just died a little, and now my brain is dead.
Zaleficent-the-wolf Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2015
Can they please do round two please!? I love this one!
Kanashimi99 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2015
oh dear go- i mean Loki!!! -nose bleeds flooding the earth-
Iknowalltheships Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2015  New Deviant
*heavy nose bleed* oh why does it have to be a one shot
AmarDarkAngle Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2015
i love this oneshot nice job on the writing
Little-Mixes Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Nice to know I'm a s#x slave... *nosebleeds*
Jewl-Dragon Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015
Benio Nose Bleed Icon 
LadyLaufeyson13 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015
This was an interesting take. I liked it. He's so demanding. Very hot.
captainamelialover Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
oh god 
ILoveFnaFseries Featured By Owner Edited Jun 10, 2015
*blood pours out of nose like a waterfall, tries to mop the floor, dies of blood loss*
graceleap18 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
love how demanding he is.
lone-wolf98 Featured By Owner May 24, 2015
Pleeeeaaaaaaase make another!!! The Monkey With the Nosebleed 
epicscoutfan Featured By Owner May 14, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
too many cooks O//////O
Sunsx3 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2015
cant say anythin but wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 0.o
AthanasiaJoker Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Do you think you could possibly send this to me in a note, my phone is messing up and won't let me read this. Plz?
pinktwinkiecupcakes Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2015
swoons so fantastic <3
awesomesauceSamurai Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015
Hehehe......more please!!!!!!😉😏
Shadamybelong Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015
kitty239 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015
Hot Swag-trap the pimp-daddy Fabulous Foxy Chat Icon Chica is a Boss (Chat Icon) Froggy Emoji-61 (Panic) [V4] lenny face 
NOMNOMSUN Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015
I am disturbed...but aroused at the same time....
THIS IS MADNESS! :iconmadnessplz:
EternallyHetalia Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015
Icon - 019 Oliver (Nosebleed) 

Oh my god... *remembers what happened reader said that*

O_O .... *meep*

(Great story BTW!!)
skylasparkle Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
*SLURSH* nose needs some of the heavy duty bounty paper towels😳
*Blinks, weird out* um what just happened?   
Thannith Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
so uhhh yeah that just happened
hadiya12 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Innocence is lost...........
LugiaFeather Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015
Holy ever loving fuck! Fucking fuck fuck Fuck fuck! I'm gonna die from blood lose! This was the ever Fucking best! I don't think I've ever said fuck so much before
Poetry-Venting Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
*falls off the bed* HOLY ROMAN EMPIRE WHAT THE FUCK LOKI *ragdoll mode activate* *slithers under the bed* I WILL PROTECT MY VITAL REGIONS
GlitchyDuck Featured By Owner May 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
But Prussia will invade them instead!
(I don't think I wanna read it anymore xD)
Poetry-Venting Featured By Owner May 22, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
*angered slithering* NO
XNightmareshadowsX Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm afraid to say "oh my god"..
Ladybugg042602 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015
Yes my lord oh god yes you have no clue how much I agree
Skyrimfan2014 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014   General Artist
I don't get the nose bleed thing, but I liked the story.
magicdoodler Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014
Damn Loki... I never knew you were so nosebleed-worthy
donatello4ever Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yessss agreed my body, mind, and my very dirty mind thank you
fangirl454 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
This is literally the best lemon I have ever read. Me and my dirty mind thank you.
donatello4ever Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yessss agreed my body, mind, and my very dirty mind thank you
PurplePearlVoice35 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014   General Artist
*stares at screen for a bit*
*has a nosebleed* By the gods...
CrystalCritic Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh.... My. Best Loki lemon I've read thus far that's for sure.
ShadowGamer1315 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer

The Monkey With the Nosebleed 

Ryuuko Ryuushi Mifune (Moe and feeling love) [V1] 

Oh oh look blood, where do that from?
Eclipseus811 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Reindeer Games played yee all
rosanialoki Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014   Photographer
I think I've fainted. 
KaytrainTheCupcake Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Student Artist
*mom walks in while I'm having a nosebleed* me: OH HEY MOM WHATCHA DOING *tries (but fails miserably) to act casual* 
Mom: are you okay?!?! 
Mom: well okay then......
Poetry-Venting Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer

i screamed " AHHHHH HOLY SHIT WHAT THE FUCK" and fell out of the chair. thank the roman empire nobody's home
bandbabe2009 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014  Student Photographer
Yep, certainly did bow down to that! Oh and :nosebleed: 
Madison-Stark Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014  Student Writer
OMG!Noseblood (Baka to test) AKHime-Noseblood (Acchi Kocchi) 
Can you write a seaquel?
LELILOKISGIRL Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014
EspeonDSi Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
*can't stop fangirling* Big Fool Emoji-05 (Pervy Nosebleed) [V2]  I lost it at "pleasure me bitch". OMG this was sooo good.
sabreahope Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wtfffff XD what the fuck are you doing Fuck you bye :FUCK yeah!: 
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